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Here is a review of your draft for Green Hornet – Charity Takes It On The Chin. 420221:
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💡 Spelling & Grammar Fixes
dispencing → dispensing (“…worry over the dispensing of a charity fund.”)
roles → rolls (“…people on the charity rolls.”)
set up → setup (“…soon a setup is put into motion…”)
fallling → falling (“…city officials are falling for it…”)
Mrs Bennet → Mrs. Bennet (Added period for standard abbreviation)
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Same as an earlier broadcasts that aired on 390606. Bennet is a friend of Britt Reed who has a worry over the dispensing of a charity fund. He has little to do with deciding who gets the benefit—he just co-signs the checks with a man named Tinker. Is there something fishy going on that needs attention?
Tinker has a buddy named Murdock, and together they’re skimming the charity fund. Britt sends out his reporters to talk to people on the charity rolls. Will he find any complaints on the street? Does the amount being spent match what is being given out? Is there a way to get an inside angle?
Tinker tries to stall Bennet, but soon a setup is put into motion to lay the blame on honest charity members like Bennet. Though the city officials are falling for it, the Green Hornet isn’t, springing into action to strike fear into the hearts of the underworld.
While reporters and police hound Mrs. Bennet, she gets a letter from the Green Hornet. Will it help her, or make her husband appear all the more guilty? At the least, the wording of the note makes the real racketeers think that the Green Hornet is horning in on their action. Using their own jealousy and greed, the Hornet sets up a trap. Get ready for the lid to be kicked off of this scam, the innocent cleared, and the crooks bundled up quite nicely for the cops.
